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Started by Ike Vinyl · 28 Jan 2007 · 28 posts survive (19 recovered from printable/lo-fi copies) · Wayback

Ike Vinyl
People of anthems, lend me your ears and opinions! I've had a bit more time on my hands recently; so i've been working on some artistic projects of mine. One of these in particular is a strip that i'm hoping to post up on the internet as a web comic. So without much further ado, here's the first page. It's called 'Y?'...

ps. i promise it makes sense later on. lol

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This post has been edited by ike_vinyl: Jan 28 2007, 03:00 PM
jase31r
what opinion can I form about it?

as you say it makes no sense?

good luck with it, though

show us more!
Oldskoolier
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roy13777r
love the drawing, Boyz got skills, But ?confused?




*hangs head in shame*
Sangr
QUOTE(roy13777 @ Jan 28 2007, 08:51 PM)
love the drawing, Girls got skills, But ?confused?
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laugh.gif Girls got skillz ya'll. Confusing and patience aint my name.

Damn Matt. You can draw. Now draw some anime biggrin.gif
~Em~r
there is definitely some artistic talent there, quite well drawn.

as for the speach bubbles, yeah, they make no sense at all!
march Er
hey yeah that's hell deep man love it!
Bexterr
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alli500r
looks good smile.gif
shenr
so....
y is it called Y?
KandiRaverr
biggrin.gif that's awesome matt.. can't wait to see the next one! tongue.gif
Gabtronr
... When I click on it, all I get is a bunch of writing, web script or something. Why is that?

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Jutsinr
QUOTE(FallenAngelG @ Jan 29 2007, 06:53 PM)
... When I click on it, all I get is a bunch of writing, web script or something. Why is that?

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Same.

I figure because the comic doesn't make sense to anyone yet I'll just wait until more are out before I try to fix the jibberish script problem laugh.gif
Bexterr
weeeeeee gibberish writing!
KandiRaverr
QUOTE(FallenAngelG @ Jan 29 2007, 06:53 PM)
... When I click on it, all I get is a bunch of writing, web script or something. Why is that?

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QUOTE(Jutsin @ Jan 29 2007, 07:11 PM)
Same.

I figure because the comic doesn't make sense to anyone yet I'll just wait until more are out before I try to fix the jibberish script problem laugh.gif
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I don't know why that is but it worked perfectly for me!
Ike Vinylr
hehe...fantastic...i've confused you all...and the reason it's called Y? is that the comic centers around the trials and tribulations in the world of my age group...which is generation y... it's just a play on words... and march, how can you love it, it's hardly started!

ps. inking second page as i write this... all will be revealed
Ike Vinyl
hey hey here's second strip

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Gabtronr
Hmm... Maybe it's cuz we use Firefox instead of IE?

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Jutsinr
QUOTE(FallenAngelG @ Jan 30 2007, 07:04 PM)
Hmm... Maybe it's cuz we use Firefox instead of IE?

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That'd be it.

.. I don't know if you're open to constructive criticism or not, ike - so I'll type up my finger words without first asking.

.. I think (for me, at least) having a comic strip means that each installment is punchy and interesting in it's own way, as well as playing a small part in the bigger story.

In another words; you shouldn't have to explain to readers "it will make sense later on", so they stay tuned to see the next installment. Each strip should make people not only enjoy it, but want to see what happens next.

That way people are saying "I read this comic strip because it's interesting, punchy, makes sense in terms of the bigger pictures, and keeps me wanting more", not "I read this comic strip because at some point in the near future the penny will drop and it may end up being really good".

Personally, I'm neither interested in the current installments or compelled to see the next ones - mainly because individually they don't make a stack of sense. On the other hand; your drawing skills are well wicked biggrin.gif

Know what I mean?
dalbzr
i dont get it..

nice drawing mate, still makes no sense to me tongue.gif
Dablzr

Posted by: Little Bear Jan 30 2007, 08:06 PM

Well I am sure as everyone has said your drawing skills are awesome but I already knew that

and I was kinda waitting to see how long it would be before you put this comic together (I remember talking with you about it a while ago)

Personally I like it, I like reading comics that dont make much sence but I guess part of it is I know that some where along the line it will make sence...
Personally... good work Ike


Little Bear
Well I am sure as everyone has said your drawing skills are awesome but I already knew that

and I was kinda waitting to see how long it would be before you put this comic together (I remember talking with you about it a while ago)

Personally I like it, I like reading comics that dont make much sence but I guess part of it is I know that some where along the line it will make sence...
Personally... good work Ike
ravingham
yeah im totally lost
SòúñÐFX
interesting...??

Something tells me I should be asking the question Y??
missvixen
QUOTE(FallenAngelG @ Jan 30 2007, 07:04 PM)
Hmm... Maybe it's cuz we use Firefox instead of IE?

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yeah it is...

...stupid firefox!
Sang
I think you need to draw a comic about the Cambridge Massive wink.gif
Ike Vinyl
lmao...there's an idea sang! laugh.gif ... and cheers justin; you've pretty much voiced the exact concerns i had about this beginning....see, i'm more used to writing complete stories and articles, and this strip style of prose is quite new to me... so bear with me, it'll get there in the end... don't be so impatient tongue.gif laugh.gif
that said, it's often a prevailing trend in web comic strips and the like to have outrageous and semi-plausible plots simply to build reader interest, and that's something i'm trying to avoid... but thanks all for your opinions and compliments, it's been much appreciated...

This post has been edited by ike_vinyl: Jan 30 2007, 10:37 PM
KandiRaver
So.. when can we expect to see more? been trying not to be impatient.. but come one.. sitting here quietly waiting for the last 3-4 months!

TIMES UP!!!

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